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Roswitha 06-18-2012 05:14 PM

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In the first image, "ships" should be "ship's".

In the second image, mother should be plural. Also, why is a Shadow planet warning me about the sneaky shadow?

Shadow 06-18-2012 05:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Roswitha (Post 31553)
Also, why is a Shadow planet warning me about the sneaky shadow?

Ah, the problem of general advice. :)

Valgor 06-18-2012 07:18 PM

It's another one of their cunning ploys!

Roswitha 06-19-2012 01:03 AM

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In the Shadow trade screen, it says, "Thank you nothing." It needs a 'for'.

In the Hive trade screen, it says "You ask too much?" That ? should probably be a . or a !

"Found a small ship wreck on <planet>." Shipwreck is one word.

In the first image, "choosen" should be "chosen".

In the second image, you might say "mention" instead of "bring up".

In the third image, the second half of the first sentence needs a "they". (I wonder if I can fit a 'fourth' in there somewhere. :) ) You will probably need to fix this in all of the components.
The second sentence needs a period.

Enjoying the game!

Valgor 06-22-2012 05:20 PM

Not really a typo, but text related :

The item "Tuned Radiation Neutralizer" is missing a decription.

Valgor 06-23-2012 08:26 AM

In the text for the Super Rats quest, "Our idea is to mutant a bunch of ants[...]" should be "Our idea is to mutate a bunch of ants[...]" .
(Though I think it's a really stupid idea, these things never work the way they planned)

ShaggyMoose 06-23-2012 10:50 AM

When it says "N of the population died" where I have seen N be a number of 0.7, 1.3 etc etc. doesn't mean much to me. Is it an absolute? What is the unit? Can it be more specific as an absolute, or convert to a percentage of the population? Make me feel a little more remorse when I let a comet take out a colony. :p

Roswitha 06-23-2012 03:12 PM

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In the first image, it says "Track that ship down and destroy them." 'Them' should be 'it'.

In the second image, the bonus isn't highlighted. It took me a minute to figure it out.

This one's more of a bug than a typo. In image 3, it announces that a Fringe colony in Arkassira was taken out by a Drox Operative (me). I was in the next system over at the time. The line above it says that the Dryad destroyed the Fringe.

Shadow 06-25-2012 11:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Valgor (Post 32260)
In the text for the Super Rats quest, "Our idea is to mutant a bunch of ants[...]" should be "Our idea is to mutate a bunch of ants[...]" .
(Though I think it's a really stupid idea, these things never work the way they planned)

Of course it's not a good idea. :)

Roswitha 06-29-2012 07:54 PM

"The radiation sickness is now over. Everyone effected is now dead!" Should be affected.


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