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Old 06-13-2013, 12:52 PM
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Default Drox Operative - Scavenger

We revealed the new race in the Invasion of the Ancients expansion today on the Drox Operative races page. Today's race is the Scavenger.
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Old 06-13-2013, 01:18 PM
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First typos for the expansion :

"A mixer of vehicle components" should be "Using a diverse mix of components";
"other races' ship corpses and technological abilities" should be "the wreckage of other races' ships and their technology";
"but other races" should be "but the other races".
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Old 06-14-2013, 02:37 AM
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"Scavengers adapted both mechanical the biological tech as solutions for advancement." 'the' should be 'and'.

Or possibly, "Since scavengers salvage from any wreckage they find, their vehicles are a conglomeration of mechanical and biological parts."

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