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Old 08-04-2012, 08:32 AM
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Where do I go to pick up the colony module?
Unfortunately the answer is obscured -- it's Jes -- the place you would go to cash in the quest. But yes, it should be in the description.
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Old 08-06-2012, 10:00 PM
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Image 1. If the colony has been destroyed, how are there enough people to riot and rebel?

Image 2. 'Completly' needs another 'e'.
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Old 08-11-2012, 06:35 PM
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1. Cutlass is a named monster. Shouldn't it be color-coded?

2. 'Who' should be 'whom' in both cases.
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Old 08-13-2012, 08:17 PM
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Looks like a variable isn't getting parsed.
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Old 08-14-2012, 12:25 AM
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1. Should be 'Deliver Weapons'.

2. 'Acheived' should be 'achieved' and 'their' should be 'its'.

3. 'You're' should be 'your'.


This game just keeps getting better and better.
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Old 08-23-2012, 03:54 PM
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I think the ants are supposed to kill all of the rats.
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Old 08-24-2012, 02:19 AM
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Can you check the minutes on the estimated time for a ship to be built. It says 59 seconds, counts down to zero, 59 seconds, counts down to zero....
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Old 08-26-2012, 02:01 AM
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1. Either change 'systems' to 'system', or change 'had' and 'is' to 'have' and 'are'.

2. This one has a couple of variable problems.
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Old 08-26-2012, 10:50 AM
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Small one under the "Semi-hardcore" tooltip of the new ship creation. "ships is" should be "ship is" or perhaps "ship's".
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Old 08-29-2012, 11:01 AM
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1. 'use' should be 'us'. I would take out the 'Yeah'.

2. 'go' is unnecessary. No Legend points for destroying a fleet?
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