Typos

[PixelLord]

Originally Posted by Roswitha

1. 'use' should be 'us'. I would take out the 'Yeah'.

And a question mark after ...isn't it (?)

[PixelLord]

Need a space between "why give" and the race name.

[Roswitha]

This sounds kind of awkward. Here's a possible rewording.

The wise stand beside a Drox Operative. Only fools oppose. You knocked this sector apart like a house of cards and brought order to the chaos. Glory to you, Operative, and congratulations on another sector in your pocket.

[ScrObot]

One of the new system modifiers is missing translations for both the name and description:
LevelModifierPlasmaStorms
LevelModifierPlasmaStormsDesc

[Roswitha]

1. Variable problem. You might consider 'pieces' instead of 'death'.

2. Maybe talk about the propaganda first, because it caused the riots.

3. It's 'insidious'.

[Roswitha]

1. Something is wrong with this picture.

2. WarCriminal needs a space.

3. Armageddon has one 'g' and two 'd's.

[Roswitha]

1. 'breech' should be 'breach'. I think it's in several other places. You need a period instead of a comma after 'critical'.

[Roswitha]

1. 'wish' should be 'wishes'.

2. 'was' should be 'is', or possibly "that's".

3. 'is' should be 'are'. You might want a period after 'normal'.

Enjoying the game.

[Roswitha]

1. 'They' should be 'it'.

2. 'breech' should be 'breach' in the third sentence.

3. Here's a possible rewrite for the last few sentences.
The spiders are immune to all known poisons, and mutating another animal to kill them seems like a bad idea. We want to kill them the old-fashioned way but we need some supplies. Hurry up though. It seems their favorite food is us.

4. No comma after 'attack'.

[Roswitha]

1. 'broke' should be 'broken'. 'planet' should be plural.

2. A comma splice is where you have two complete sentences separated by a comma. You can either replace the comma with a period, or put 'and', 'or', or 'but' after the comma.
In the second paragraph, you have a comma splice between the first two sentences. I'd recommend a period. You might consider another period after 'accepted' since that sentence is pretty long.

3. Variable problem with the reward.