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#31
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![]() So, I noticed I can just look at the database files instead of clicking on chat repeatedly...
![]() From the Warmaster: "I've never doubted the gods", "Praise the gods! Praise Din and Thaden!", and "By the gods, we will destroy our enemies!" should have the word capitalized. This one is iffy, I'm not sure if it needs capitalization in this context: "I can feel a god's blessing within you." In a Vendor's dialogue there was, "May the gods guide you!" In a Weaponsmith's: "Work and war. It's glory to the gods!" In Din's dialogue, "You can't always count on even the gods, but change is more steady than the sun." The Armorsmith has a dialogue, "Armor! Get your Armor!" Armor should be lowercase the second time. He also needs an apostrophe on "days" in, "A hard days work..." and probably an "a" before "Fine killing". The Gambler says, "Now that you've scoured the deep, why not a little game." I think it should be "why not try a little game?" Din says, "A happy life consists not in the absence, but in the mastery of hardships." This sounds better to me when I add the word "of" after "absence". He also says, "The road is long, you must preserver". This one needs a period at the end and I'm guessing "preserver" was meant to be "persevere". There's also, "You're transformation is near completion and your service has changed destinity." It should be "Your transformation", and destiny is misspelled. That's all I can get at the moment, I need to go get my windshield replaced. |
#32
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![]() Found one, where bosses with the same name can turn up in the very same world.
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#33
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![]() I believe (I could be wrong) that when you are talking about a generic group, like gods, it should be lower case. If you are using it as a specific name, like God from the bible, it should be capitalized.
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Steven Peeler Designer/programmer Depths of Peril, Kivi's Underworld, Din's Curse, Drox Operative, Zombasite, Din's Legacy, Drox Operative 2, & Din's Champion Wishlist Din's Champion |
#34
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![]() I looked it up and you're right, you do use the lowercase "gods" for a polytheistic pantheon or just when referring to more than one god. Sorry about that then.
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#35
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![]() Got one: weapon vendor says "You there, this here weapon I carry is called Vera. She ain't for sell..."
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#36
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![]() Found another one: if a townsperson turns into an undead, and he gets killed by another townsperson, when you talk to a random townsperson, he'll say "Too bad XXXX got killed by a <blank>."
So it will read something like "Too bad Dmitri got killed by a ." |
#37
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![]() A blunt weapon smith just greeted me with the words "Humph... You're not a runt it you like 'em blunt!"
Should be "[...] if you like 'em blunt!" |
#38
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![]() "An altar has built to serve the goddess..."
Missing the word been. v0.912 |
#39
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![]() Fresh from the mouth of Lucia, a Fancy Vendor : "How are you? Don't say good, because it makes people suspicion. Dark times breed paranoia."
Should be "[...] because it makes people suspicious. [...]" |
#40
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![]() On the Other Stats screen, the pop-up information for Perception reads "x% chance perceive Lvl y trap correctly"
Should be "x% chance to perceive Lvl y trap correctly" Also, there's a missing space between "Damage" and triple-digit (possibly quadruple-digit as well) minimum damage numbers on the regular stats screen. Last edited by Valgor : 04-21-2010 at 12:08 PM. |
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