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![]() The quest to destroy an evil altar has a somewhat odd name, "Destroy the evil altar curse". You might want to drop "curse" off the name. The description needs an "is" in the second sentence, where it says "It cursing more and more.."
When a quest or event mentions an elite or a hunter whose creature type starts with a vowel it should say "an" instead of "a", as in the case of Asp Naga Priests or Urchin Hunters for example. In regards to the dialog about beheading traitors, "killed" needs to have a lower case k ("You Killed Sibyl in the field..."). A minor typo in the bestiary about Saurian Mages has a space before the comma after "Strong", though that last sentence sounds a little odd to me and makes me wonder if a word was left out entirely? A dialog tells me the gods don't have time to make nobodys, but this should be "nobodies" instead. I'm not sure if this is true of all Naga, but when fighting Viper Naga I noticed the word Naga is in lower case in their name, whereas any other multi-word creature name has each word capitalized. |
#12
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![]() Unsure if this has been mentioned before:
Soulshiver (a Apparition) should read: Soulshiver (an apparition) or Soulshiver (an Apparition) |
#13
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![]() The debuff applied when stamina drops to zero is called "NoStamina".
Maybe it should be called "Exhausted" or "Exhaustion" instead... |
#14
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![]() Please delivery this information to Trahamilton as quickly as possible.
Should be: Please deliver this information... |
#15
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![]() Rawhide Shoulder items have shoulder in lower case, which breaks consistency with item naming conventions.
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#16
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![]() In quest giving:
Kill X Dark Elf Mercenarys Should be Mercenaries |
#17
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![]() I just found two unique mobs:
Posiondealer and Posionmaw (both are wampires.) I'm thinking it's suppose to be PoIson, and not Posion. =) |
#18
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![]() Find the buried treasure quest has an odd description, "Find the buried horde treasure". This should probably be "Find the buried treasure hoard."
When you have a quest to find Wisps' charred remains, it adds an extra s to remains in the description. The bestiary description for Orc says, "weren't quiet dead". Should be quite. This one isn't a typo, but I think the wording could be better. The last sentence of the quest description for "War with..." may sound better as "Kill enough of the to ensure they leave us alone" or something to that extent. Currently, it sounds a little bit odd. Well, to me it does. The help text on Secret Doors should be reworded slightly. Something like "...sections of walls are really illusions, and are really secret doors leading to hidden areas." |
#19
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![]() Solving "Retrieve important information from Guy McRandomname" quests for the Steward sometimes still gives me a "Delivered package successfully!" (don't know if that's the exact wording) message.
Incidentally, the dialog button you have to click in order to solve the quest is labeled "Deliver package" in these cases. |
#20
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![]() Warlock's Demon Mastery skill should have an apostrophe on demons in "summoned demons damage".
Ransom messages from monsters are missing the period after the name of the townsperson. I think the town name of Longbrrok is supposed to be Longbrook. |
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