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"Hidden within the anomaly was some ship components."
Was should be were. |
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Speaking of which, I found it unintuitive that "light armor plating" (I think that was its name) was a heavy component. I was so happy to find a seemingly light component (and it was yellow!), just to have my hopes dashed!
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When you deliver a needed item to a planet, the message it gives you mentions the planet name where the item name should be.
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In the first attachment, 'your' should be 'you're'.
In the second attachment, it's either missing an 'an' or station needs to be plural. |
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In the diplomat screen, Brunt says "Don't try our patients." That's 'patience'.
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#16
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'Spaces' should be 'Space'. See attachment.
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Not exactly a typo, but the wording of the Max Speed tooltip reads a bit strange.
I'd say "The max speed ever" should be changed to something along the lines of "The highest speed possible" . |
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Here are some more corrections for the tooltips in Drox' options menus :
Graphics Options : - There's a missing comma after "numbers", and "[...],but better resolutions might be slower." should be "Higher resolutions might be slower." in the Screen Size tooltip. - There's a missing comma after "slider" in the Gamma slider tooltip. - There's a superfluous comma after "NPCs" in the Better Lighting tooltip. - There's a comma missing after "new frequency" in the Screen Frequency tooltip. - It should read "[...] how far away the camera is [...]" in the Zoom slider tooltip. - It should read "Anti-aliasing makes the edges of things look less jaggy." and "The higher the number of samples, the better the graphics, but it might slow down the game." in the Anti-Aliasing tooltip. The reference to swords should be removed as well. - It should be "a glowy effect" in the Bloom tooltip. - There's a missing comma after "If you turn this off" in the Detail Models tooltip. (What exactly does this option do in Drox?) - There's a missing comma after "slider" in the Minimap Alpha tooltip. - It should be "you're having problems" in the Use Hardware Cursor tooltip. - It should be "[...] most programs that deal with images [...]" and "JPGs" instead of "jpgs" in the Screenshot Type (which should be named Screenshot Format) tooltip. - It should be "[...] the slowest ones as well." in the Highest Quality button tooltip. Sound Options : - It should be "This option chooses the device [...]" in the Sound Device tooltip. Game Options : - It should be "[...] above the player's ship" in the Show Player Health Bar tooltip. - It should be "monsters", and "heads" should be removed from the end of the Show Ingame Health Bars tooltip. - "show items on ground key" should be "show components key" in the Show Items Toggle tooltip. - The tooltip for Show Combat Effects should read "Chooses wheter or not to display combat special effects." . - "world" should be replaced with "planet" in the Show Names tooltip. - It should read "[...] when the player is hit hard." in the Can Shake Screen tooltip. (My screen will shake on its own when I hit it hard, thanks ) - The tooltip for Show Clock should read "Displays a clock in the bottom right corner of the main game screen." . - It should be "Shows the numbers [...]" in the Show Relation Numbers tooltip. - "display" should be replaced with "appear" in the Tooltip Delay tooltip. - "left top" should be "top left" in the Show Full Player Menu (which should be named Show Full Player Info) tooltip. - It should read "[...] the first slot will still fill, if ever empty." in the Autofill Use Slots tooltip. - It should be "[...] when you start the game" in the Play Intro Movie tooltip. Multiplayer Options : - Both "we"s should be replace with "you" in the Client Data Rate tooltip. Phew. |
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If you try to repair (repair all) a ship that is already fully repaired the message says "Nothing needs repaired!"
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You beat me to it. Just to clarify, this should be either "Nothing needs repair" or "Nothing needs to be repaired".
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